Uguels song.

http://www.poetry.com/Publications/search.asp
Your search for " subratam" was unsuccessful

 

i found a big list when I put it as first name

 

last name = BISWAS first name= SUBRATAM

 

And when clicking a name of a poem - any of them- they just jump back to the main page with several hundreds of book titles (?) without names on the outside so it is unfindable to see a possible poem anyhow as they don't say nowhere where the finds from that name can be read at all.
So i keep with the "unsuccessful"

 

Hm strange it's working for me; here's one

Hope..
Don't lose hope
When u have none beside u
Try to find different ways
Try to do something new
Don't lose hope
When everyone hav turned their back
U hav lots of difficulties
When u go on the right track
Don't lose hope
When u r trusted by none
Everyone will b with you
When ur jobs will b done
Don't lose hope
When watever u do is wrong
Its sufferings for few moments
It will not last long
Don't lose hope
When life u feel has come to end
Coz god is always with u
As philosopher,guide and friend

Subratam Biswas

 

jooske..
there shouldnt be any problem.. i just checked...
step 1. www.poetry.com
step 2 search for poets
last name = BISWAS
first name = SUBRATAM
step 3. pages with my poems as links
just click on them and you will go to the poem page

anyway heres another creation of mine..

He is a small boy
Who doesn't kno where he has born
He sleeps in a pavement
And has got his dress torn
He sees evryday all the others
He too wants to b like them
No he cant do wat he wish
And he dunno whom to blame
He works in a garage
Bz with his different machine parts
He is bz till late at nite
Again early morning his job starts
He dreams a lot
Bout riding a mercedes car
But he is bz repairing the same
In the very next hour
Other guys get education
Changes their car evry hour
He also does the same
Xcept repairing the left car

remember last name BISWAS first name SUBRATAM
search and click only by poems name

there you go detox... hope you all like my poems and please give some genuine comments... (onething i think the real topic is gettin shifted maybe any mod can make my poems as another topic and we can continue on that... whatever is good)

 

Thanks Subratam!
That was a sweet poem!
Hope we will see more of you in the future....
Yes, some verses might be interesting to put in a song...
But it has to be abridged a little.
For songs tend to be concise...
I'll see about it...
I'll talk to my manager Cochise...


OH you would be so kind as to the title of your poems you put in the poems site?

CU!

Hey Cochise!

I'll love to sing but I'm afraid my voice is not at his best now. I have the flu presently and a sore throat...
Sure, it won't last for always... so I might be better in a couple of days!



Uguel

 

Hope you get feeling better as fast as possible Uguel!

 

Forget this:

Sorry Chap!

I didn't know your message was on it's way!

I gotta read it now!

Uguel

 

thx a lot uguel.... i am always here for any cause for wilders....

 

Thanks Detox!

I work in a school with young children and presently about 90% of the kids have gotten the flu!
I just cross my fingers not to catch pneumonia like I did 3 years ago...There are lots of germs presently!
Take precautions but the germs"take" me ANW!


Uguel

 

I know the feeling with my young one being in preschool right now

 

Uguel, sorry your sick. Hope that you get better soon. I'm still working on the song. I was going to put the bands name in it, but since I don't have a decided upon name I can't do it yet. Who's going to decide on the "Official" name for the band? Give me a name and I'll have it done by Monday.

 

hey uguel,
be well our friend
be well soon
i pray to GOD and so does all
you will be ok by tomm afternoon
ooh children.. little flowers
you are looking after them
its so nice being with them(than trojans)
i hope i was doin the same
b safe and take care please
we really want to hear your voice
we know you are best out of all
we will move others to second choice
... b well soon

about band name.. lets recollect already suggested names and make out a poll forum.. for a week... if thats ok.. and then we will make "world of our own"

 

from Subratam

Hey Subratam! There is a nice thread here at the Wilders for putting your poems in. See "I say"

https://www.wilderssecurity.com/showthread.php?t=8370

I like your little boy poem best! It's simple, direct but very authentic!
I will also add stg in the thread "I say" I wrote a couple of weeks ago.
Hope that Beetlejuice will join in too!

But I have just little time to write poems for I have lots of things to do! Like everyone else I guess!.

TTFN!

Uguel

 

Thanks a lot Beetlejuice!

Well, Beetlejuice I haven't decided of the title but maybe Detox, LWM or FanJ might decide which name is the best...It will also depends of the song we might present...
If it's a sentimental song, then the name of the band might sound soft....
But if it's an energitic song , the name might be more "dynamite"!

But all thing considered...I'll take a nice, sentimental and very short one! You see my voice is soft but rather commonplace!

Uguel

 

thx again uguel... u showed me the right place... now lets start with the mission the post was started by jooske...."longest and finest" thread....
come on why the hell did it have to stop....
i take the responsiblity to make it alive and kicking.... come on... friends...

sing a song
when you are alone....
you will feel winds
waving in your tone....

(by the way dun forget to take care uguel )
meet ya all at
http://www.wilderssecurity.com/showthread.php?t=8370

 

Loooooooooooooooooool!!! Very funny Cochise!

Yes I play guitar but I make no claims on how well (I will never be a Segovia!)

I will gladly try to come up with something for you folks to judge on whether it is suitable for the song but don't get your hopes up

I'm looking forward with Cochise and everyone else to hearing you sing

@Subratum I really like your poems, I look forward to seeing them on the link you gave

 

from Dan Perez

I'm looking forward to hearing one of your songs.
Never be a Segovia? That's okay for Segovia died in 1987 while "you" are still alive!


Uguel

 

Just curious. What kind of guitar have you got?
Acoustic? Classical? Electric?
What kind of music do you play?


Uguel

 

Well, some would dispute the theory that I am alive

... I have an Alvarez-Yairi DY-40 acoustic as well as a Martin "Backpacker" model (acoustic with builtin pickup).

I like playing the Stones, Lemonheads, Pink Floyd, Lead Dumpling and Neil Young as well as dabble in composing my own songs.

 

Oh yeah! I like Lead Dumpling too! They wrote the famous
"escalator to bedlam", right?


Uguel

 

Looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool !!!!

Yes, right you are! But, though I liked that song at first, I was asked so often to play it on guitar while in Highschool I became completely disenchanted with it!

 

Very good. It's a good sign when people keep asking you to play a piece. I have an acoustic one and a little classical.
I play Celtic stuff mainly. But I'm just an amateur!
LOL! People here use to applaud just when I put the guitar back in it's case! My favourite song I like to play is "Down by the Salley Gardens" Which is based on the poem of the same name by W.B. Yeats. Another song I like is "The Flower of Sweet Strabane" !



Uguel

 

Hello Uguel
Which do you prefer more - Clannad or Enya?
(click on names)