Creating a rhyme

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  1. Peaches4U

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    Let's get those creative talents going ..........
    We make a rhyme by adding one line at a time. How many lines shall we have in one poem? I say 25 lines ... anyone else give a suggestion?

    I'll start the first one. http://img8.exs.cx/img8/8817/Peaches_lady.gif

    In the dwindling light the fireflies glowed,
     
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    In the dwindling light the fireflies glowed,
    And the green grass the homeowner mowed.
     
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    In the dwindling light the fireflies glowed,
    And the green grass the homeowner mowed.

    trying hard to miss his toes,
     
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    In the dwindling light the fireflies glowed,
    And the green grass the homeowner mowed.

    trying hard to miss his toes,
    hit a tree and bent his nose
     
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    oh dear, u have to add your line to mine. the rhyme should be on the page as lines are added.
     
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    did I fix 'em right now you picky picky person :D
     
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    In the dwindling light the fireflies glowed,
    And the green grass the homeowner mowed.

    trying hard to miss his toes,
    hit a tree and bent his nose

    thinking to himself, can I get another one of those?
     
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    In the dwindling light the fireflies glowed,
    And the green grass the homeowner mowed.

    trying hard to miss his toes,
    hit a tree and bent his nose

    thinking to himself, can I get another one of those?
    Sure. Why not? Try a piece of garden hose.
     
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    and you'll end up dewy as a rose
     
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    In the dwindling light the fireflies glowed,
    And the green grass the homeowner mowed.

    trying hard to miss his toes,
    hit a tree and bent his nose

    thinking to himself, can I get another one of those?
    Sure. Why not? Try a piece of garden hose.

    and you'll end up dewy as a rose
    no matter which way the wind blows
     
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    In the dwindling light the fireflies glowed,
    And the green grass the homeowner mowed.

    trying hard to miss his toes,
    hit a tree and bent his nose

    thinking to himself, can I get another one of those?
    Sure. Why not? Try a piece of garden hose.

    and you'll end up dewy as a rose
    no matter which way the wind blows

    the fragrance is like a fine perfume
     
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    who me, picky - o_O :D :D never! :-*
     
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    In the dwindling light the fireflies glowed,
    And the green grass the homeowner mowed.

    trying hard to miss his toes,
    hit a tree and bent his nose

    thinking to himself, can I get another one of those?
    Sure. Why not? Try a piece of garden hose.

    and you'll end up dewy as a rose
    no matter which way the wind blows

    the fragrance is like a fine perfume
    scenting through my living room

    where art thou Romeo?
     
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    In the dwindling light the fireflies glowed,
    And the green grass the homeowner mowed.

    trying hard to miss his toes,
    hit a tree and bent his nose

    thinking to himself, can I get another one of those?
    Sure. Why not? Try a piece of garden hose.

    and you'll end up dewy as a rose
    no matter which way the wind blows

    the fragrance is like a fine perfume
    scenting through my living room

    where art thou Romeo?
    beneath the portico
     
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    In the dwindling light the fireflies glowed,
    And the green grass the homeowner mowed.

    trying hard to miss his toes,
    hit a tree and bent his nose

    thinking to himself, can I get another one of those?
    Sure. Why not? Try a piece of garden hose.

    and you'll end up dewy as a rose
    no matter which way the wind blows

    the fragrance is like a fine perfume
    scenting through my living room

    where art thou Romeo?
    beneath the portico

    Come my love into the light
     
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    In the dwindling light the fireflies glowed,
    And the green grass the homeowner mowed.

    trying hard to miss his toes,
    hit a tree and bent his nose

    thinking to himself, can I get another one of those?
    Sure. Why not? Try a piece of garden hose.

    and you'll end up dewy as a rose
    no matter which way the wind blows

    the fragrance is like a fine perfume
    scenting through my living room

    where art thou Romeo?
    beneath the portico

    Come my love into the light
    I do look a fright!
     
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    In the dwindling light the fireflies glowed,
    And the green grass the homeowner mowed.

    trying hard to miss his toes,
    hit a tree and bent his nose

    thinking to himself, can I get another one of those?
    Sure. Why not? Try a piece of garden hose.

    and you'll end up dewy as a rose
    no matter which way the wind blows

    the fragrance is like a fine perfume
    scenting through my living room

    where art thou Romeo?
    beneath the portico

    Come my love into the light
    I do look a fright!

    no tears my dear, for it's alright
     
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    Sorry. You have to do that over.
     
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    yeh sure, u are probably falling off the chair wirh laughter. u realize that trying to operate a right hand mouse with the left hand is a challenge.
    ;)
     
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    In the dwindling light the fireflies glowed,
    And the green grass the homeowner mowed.

    trying hard to miss his toes,
    hit a tree and bent his nose

    thinking to himself, can I get another one of those?
    Sure. Why not? Try a piece of garden hose.

    and you'll end up dewy as a rose
    no matter which way the wind blows

    the fragrance is like a fine perfume
    scenting through my living room

    where art thou Romeo?
    beneath the portico

    Come my love into the light
    I do look a fright!

    no tears my dear, for it's alrigh
    if I ease up and squeeze you tight
     
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    In the dwindling light the fireflies glowed,
    And the green grass the homeowner mowed.

    trying hard to miss his toes,
    hit a tree and bent his nose

    thinking to himself, can I get another one of those?
    Sure. Why not? Try a piece of garden hose.

    and you'll end up dewy as a rose
    no matter which way the wind blows

    the fragrance is like a fine perfume
    scenting through my living room

    where art thou Romeo?
    beneath the portico

    Come my love into the light
    I do look a fright!

    no tears my dear, for it's alrigh
    if I ease up and squeeze you tight

    hold me gently through the night
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    In the dwindling light the fireflies glowed,
    And the green grass the homeowner mowed.

    trying hard to miss his toes,
    hit a tree and bent his nose

    thinking to himself, can I get another one of those?
    Sure. Why not? Try a piece of garden hose.

    and you'll end up dewy as a rose
    no matter which way the wind blows

    the fragrance is like a fine perfume
    scenting through my living room

    where art thou Romeo?
    beneath the portico

    Come my love into the light
    I do look a fright!

    no tears my dear, for it's alrigh
    if I ease up and squeeze you tight

    hold me gently through the night
    until appears the morning light
     
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    In the dwindling light the fireflies glowed,
    And the green grass the homeowner mowed.

    trying hard to miss his toes,
    hit a tree and bent his nose

    thinking to himself, can I get another one of those?
    Sure. Why not? Try a piece of garden hose.

    and you'll end up dewy as a rose
    no matter which way the wind blows

    the fragrance is like a fine perfume
    scenting through my living room

    where art thou Romeo?
    beneath the portico

    Come my love into the light
    I do look a fright!

    no tears my dear, for it's alright
    if I ease up and squeeze you tight

    hold me gently through the night
    until appears the morning light

    softly sighing, sunlight embraced
     
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    In the dwindling light the fireflies glowed,
    And the green grass the homeowner mowed.

    trying hard to miss his toes,
    hit a tree and bent his nose

    thinking to himself, can I get another one of those?
    Sure. Why not? Try a piece of garden hose.

    and you'll end up dewy as a rose
    no matter which way the wind blows

    the fragrance is like a fine perfume
    scenting through my living room

    where art thou Romeo?
    beneath the portico

    Come my love into the light
    I do look a fright!

    no tears my dear, for it's alright
    if I ease up and squeeze you tight

    hold me gently through the night
    until appears the morning light

    softly sighing, sunlight embraced
    Romeo missing, with out a trace
     
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